Score: 9

"Fantastic Game"

submission: Toss the Turtle

date: August 22, 2009

Addicting, inventive, fun, good graphics, all things that a good game needs that this one has. I definitely think that you need to make the game harder though, or at least make a medal at 500,000 or 1,000,000. I, who don't play flash games much, got 535,307 feet in one with only a sniper rifle, rocket, and $40,000 cannon. You should have to have all of the best items to reach the top achievement. The one thing I think is gay though, is the UFOs. You can't dodge them much and they stop you automatically. It gets old. That's how I lost. I still like the game though. Nice job.

Score: 8

"Enjoyable Game"

submission: Digital Genius

date: June 17, 2009

Good music. Fun. Interesting. Hard. Needs instructions on that weight one, though. I don't get it and I scored a lot before it froze. Second time in a row it froze. Need to fix that. I hate how most the time I get 100 or 1 percent though.

Score: 10

"Nice Video"

submission: Give Me Your Eyes

date: April 3, 2009

Good song and fairly good animation. Good message. We need more of these out there.

Score: 7

"Good, but could be better"

submission: -PdG- Yet Another House Demo

date: December 21, 2009

I like the intro, although I think there a couple too many sounds playing at once for an intro. It should be more drawn out in the final version. I think that the bass line should be played longer by it self before the other main synths come in. You could turn up the bass line just a little bit as well. I like the melody when it comes in. Another thing I might change is the amount of sweep like Mystery Moon Pie said. It seems like when the bass beat and snares are played near each other that it plays two beats. I think I might just take out the snares because they conflict with the bass beat. Overall nice song, but improvements could still be made on this part.

Score: 7

"A Little Plain"

submission: [[System-Malfunction]]

date: October 21, 2009

Not much besides your kick, claps, and taps, but put together well. You definitely need some more sounds in there somewhere to make it sound more professional. I realize that it is hardstyle, but it needs more than what it is now. Maybe you could just add in another synth in there like the one that you have, but just have it a key lower. That makes me realize that you don't have many low notes besides the one synth in the background and the kick. I like the deep vocals, as I always do. I like the melody when it comes in. I like the piano and the feel that it gives to the song, although I think that it could be EQed better. The ending seems a bit abrupt; another vocal sample or a reuse of the "rock the Bass" would be good to end it while also leaving it open to adding onto.

I like it, but as I said it is just a little bit too plain for my taste. Keep up the good work. You're one of the reasons I still get on NewGrounds.

Score: 7

"Somewhat of a Let Down"

submission: Brando - Pure WiP

date: August 5, 2009

I like what you did with the piano. This version of the piano sounds better. That pad is a little repetitive to me. Dunno how to fix it, but I still think it is. I like the bass pad at 0:14. The electronic sound at 0:27 sounded almost cheap or bad compared to the quality of the previous sounds. That was a real let down. Maybe its just the effect you put on it, but I don't really like it until it gets louder. Even still I think you could make it better. I think you should add more than just claps at 0:40 after the lull. It was kind of a let down too. The lengthen of the melody at 0:54 is a little awkward. Maybe because it seems short. The part at 1:00 should be added to so its not just that one sound. The sound at 1:29 didn't fit completely well. Is it some effect you put on it to make it sound distorted? I don't like the distortion much. I agree with the others in that the kick needs to be stronger. I think you should change it up more at 1:42 too because it gets repetitive. 1:55 is weird how you took that sound out. You might want to make it longer or just change it completely. The outro needs to be better too.

As it is now, I love the intro until 0:27. I think I like the other classical version better because it has less flaws as of now. I realize this is a WiP, but I still think you need to fix a lot of the distortion to make it sound more normal. Especially the sound at 0:27. This needs work, but as I said in my review on the classical version it could be totally epic.

By the way, have you tried changing the piano on the classical version to this piano? I think it would sound better.